empty me

empty me

A Poem by proudmommy
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for my 7 years relationship that just ended mid of may 2009 for u Mr. Christopher Adena i made this one on the same day he told me its over. :(

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I used to love so much before
he's the one that i adore
but the ending,
is not what I've been expected for
knock! Knock! on the door
my heart won't open anymore.

I've groans and moans after all these years
I've to runaway from all those fears
hide my face away from my tears
its hurt so much to be this sincere

i tried to cover up all my pain
all i feel is much the same
for this emptiness running through my vein
cause me to live forever in vain

                          -iyah-




© 2010 proudmommy


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thank you very much.i appreciate it so much..

Posted 14 Years Ago


I ready your about section, so I must encourage you to continue writing, because this was actually really good. For me raw emotions make for the best poetry. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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proudmommy
proudmommy

laoag city, ilocos norte, Philippines



About
To start with Im Ma.LLma Lucie Clemente. Friends calls me yem, yama, pot, iyah or insyang .:) 25 years old and a proud mommy of ETHAN JOSEPH CLEMENTE ADENA. A spoiled brat, easy going person but i .. more..

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