The birds I heard today, which, fortunately, did not come within the scope of my science, sang as freshly as if it had been the first morning of creation. - Thoreau
"I once had a sparrow alight upon my shoulder for a moment, while I was hoeing in a village garden, and I felt that I was more distinguished by that circumstance that I should have been by any epaulet I could have worn." - Thoreau
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A wonderful poem shared Pete. The Native Americans watched the birds. When the birds and silence and hiding. A big storm is coming. Nice flow of thoughts led to amazing ending. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote
Posted 3 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
3 Years Ago
i love birds and anything of nature. i have tremendous respect for the native americans' way of lif.. read morei love birds and anything of nature. i have tremendous respect for the native americans' way of life. they lived with deep reverence and respect. the white man can be greedy, disrespectful and inconsiderate. thanks for sharing coyote ... :)
I think once we really find our spiritual selves (not necessarily in a religious sense), we will find the answers to those questions...
maybe we are that little bird and that little bird is us.
nicely composed, Pete, always a joy to read your words.'
j.
Posted 3 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
3 Years Ago
i like your thoughts on this. when a person can say that they are a bird and a bird one of us then .. read morei like your thoughts on this. when a person can say that they are a bird and a bird one of us then a sort of divinity is reached (a higher power so to speak). i think you are onto something big here.. thanhks j. - enlightening ... :)
A wonderful poem shared Pete. The Native Americans watched the birds. When the birds and silence and hiding. A big storm is coming. Nice flow of thoughts led to amazing ending. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote
Posted 3 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
3 Years Ago
i love birds and anything of nature. i have tremendous respect for the native americans' way of lif.. read morei love birds and anything of nature. i have tremendous respect for the native americans' way of life. they lived with deep reverence and respect. the white man can be greedy, disrespectful and inconsiderate. thanks for sharing coyote ... :)
Our avian friends I do feel bring us closer to our Creator. Their birdsong at dawn can touch the spirit in a very special way. Also they are such fascinating creatures. Amazing that those little wings can carry them thousands of miles. We had a Robin who would flit into our kitchen when I left the door open. Sometimes I used to think it was the spirit of a loved one come to pay us a visit. Love these creatures and your Thoreau quote Pete.
Chris
Posted 3 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
3 Years Ago
yes, fascinating they are. each morning i open my eyes because they've awakened me with their song .. read moreyes, fascinating they are. each morning i open my eyes because they've awakened me with their song and reminded me that i am alive for another beautiful day. they bring hope and smiles ... :)
A very precious poem.... birds come from eggs...
but songs become embroidered on silken pillow cases.
Thank you for Dreams of Dolphins at plat,,, truly, Pat
God is existed in everything, even though these little graceful creatures, as I read your lovely sweet words I feel your yearning to be that bird, to see what he sees, to know what he knows... something maybe us human don't acknowledge. You opened a door for enlightment here, and one can't but ponder through this rich thought. I love this little gem of a song. Thank You always Pete 💕
Posted 3 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
3 Years Ago
whenever i am graced by the presence of one, i feel he is visiting me. they're so gentle and cheery.. read morewhenever i am graced by the presence of one, i feel he is visiting me. they're so gentle and cheery, they way they look at me and sing. heavenly, divine ... :)
3 Years Ago
no better words to be said :) they are, they are...
Bird can be fun to watch flying and flittering about and also noisy lol.
Posted 3 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
especially when you're trying to sleep but not a bad way to wake up. i don't need an alarm clock wh.. read moreespecially when you're trying to sleep but not a bad way to wake up. i don't need an alarm clock when my window is open. they bring peace, joy and happiness ... :)
I love reading, writing, music, nature, God and feeling emotion, not necessarily in that order. To me, these things go hand in hand. My favorite writer is Henry David Thoreau. I think he was a geni.. more..