Smoke Screen

Smoke Screen

A Poem by Pete
"

You cannot perceive beauty but with a serene mind. - Thoreau

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attractively rolled
lit, full-lipped beauty bold
all said, nothing told



© 2024 Pete


Author's Note

Pete
"The perception of beauty is a moral test." - Thoreau

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quite like this, it's quite sexy,
I hope that's what you were going for.


Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Pete

5 Months Ago

yes - seductive. thank you l & a.
really liked these luscious lines, the rhyming also heighten it to another plane. beauty will save us all, and a mind that can perceive beauty is one that is liberated. enchanting, this haiku is brimming with the appreciation of beauty.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

5 Months Ago

thank you em. "Beauty is power; a smile is its sword. The soul that sees beauty may sometimes walk .. read more
Love the title Pete. Smoke screen indeed. Brevity with an impact.

Chris

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

5 Months Ago

thanks chris, my best to you as always,
Yeah I once had a joint like that.

Posted 5 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Pete

5 Months Ago

you devil you, and i thought it was tobacco.
dear Pete... as the Holidays are near when Silver Bells Ring... we are more aware of Amor'e and become a bit naughty and nice. sweetly, Pat

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

5 Months Ago

you made me smile before i head out for my daily constitutional with milo.
Patricia Wedel

5 Months Ago

A Smile for every Mile as you walk Milo... smackingly Cute !!! Pat
Love it
Very good hope you well there

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

5 Months Ago

thanks julie and happy holidays. all well here and hoping same for you.

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Boston, MA



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