Deep Inside of You

Another brand new song...

Take me down

And press your lips against me

The perfect storm

In release - I am shaking.

Your desire finds me weak.

But your fingertips you heal me.

Through the pound of your heart beating

I want to feel you deep.

　

Chorus

And I want to roll

Deep inside of you

Ember to your fire,

Turned outside in.

　

I swallow your pearl.

Girl, you’ve got me crazy.

Friend and lover

Every gaze enslaves me

As I look into your eyes

And feel your wetness dripping.

Your air fills my lungs

Each breath shapes me.

Reviews

[NA]

Awesome lyrics...really enjoyed :)

[tuvi]

Hi Shwan ,

Nice writeup , like the cross links :P
the title got me here and i loved reading it ....
these lines are a marvel :
I swallow your pearl complete

Girl, you’ve got me crazy.

Friend and lover

I’m a slave at your mercy.

Keep it coming this way and make us delighted with this sorta work :)

[KeeD]

And in your breath I am inspired.
Just the icing on the cake, very cool.. loved the lyrics..

[Shawn Purcell]

Thanks a lot. I really appreciate it

[Shawn Purcell]

It was actually supposed to be "In your finger tips you feel me." Thanks for the close reading.

[Tina]

no problem ;) I look forward to future writings from you.

[Shawn Purcell]

Great! Thanks so much...btw, I love you "about the author" line

[Shawn Purcell]

Check out "Hinges"...It's on the mature side

[Tina]

The definition of an erotic poem. Well done!
Only error I found was in these lines:

"
Your desire finds to heal me.
I your fingertips you feel me

"

Is that "your fingertips you feel me"? or "with your fingertips you feel me"?

well done!