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..My Cries..

..My Cries..

A Poem by Raven Radke
"

..I wish my big bro could save me..

"

I cry my eyes out for you

I scream your name in the night

I pray to God you won't leave

But the thought of you is

putting me in deeper sorrow..

 

You are my best friend

You made me smile when we talked

You saved myself from falling

But now you are the one who

Is making me fall...

 

Sitting in the corner of my dark room

I think of all the times we shared

The emotions we had

But now I don't know who

I can look up too and

smile...

 

Your making me cry!

Please don't leave!

Your my best friend and I don't know

what to do anymore

Please come back and stay by my side

My tears are falling like rain

and making it hard to breathe

Please big bro don't leave...

 

February 7th,2010

 Raven Radke

 

© 2010 Raven Radke


Author's Note

Raven Radke
..My big bro is the cause of this...
..it's telling the truth on how i feel right now..
..comment if you want..

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Beautiful(:
I Hate When People You Love Leave...

Posted 11 Years Ago


good poem.. i know how you feel.. one of my best friends is leaving too.

Posted 11 Years Ago


nothings going toi change yew now
you will stay alone when your family pushes yew away!
you wont have anyone else to turn to for comfort!
no one will save yew! so stop crying and just deal with it!
so what your brother left but that doesnt mean you have to sit and mope
around like some b***h with no idea what to do!
Your worth nothing and that will never change!
So get over it already! you wont change and it will never change!
He left and it's all over! You need to move on already!

Posted 11 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That must be so horrible to be feeling, but the piece definitely gets teh total feelign across

Posted 11 Years Ago


Awe this is so sad! I'm so sorry Sweetie

Posted 11 Years Ago


im sooo sorry!!! :(

Posted 11 Years Ago


I'm so sorry. I don't even want to begin to think of what you're brother has done to you to make you feel this way.:( I hope everything gets better, and I hope you don't feel as bad when it does get better. Amazing poem though, the words expressed deep dispair. I love it, even though it truly is sad.

--Blood

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Raven Radke

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