The way I feel

The way I feel

A Poem by Raven Radke
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just an old one

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I love you

I need you

I miss you

I wish you didn't do that

Why did you hurt me so?

 

I hope you know you smashed my heart

I hope your happy with her

I want you to know that I can't love you

like she can...

What does she have that I don't?

 

Is it her elegant smile?

Is it her soothing voice?

Is it the way she moves?

Is it the way she looks?

Tell me what it is?

 

I know she's a lot prettier than me

I just want you to know

I love you still

but I don't know if I can trust you...

 Febraury 8th, 2010

 Raven Radke

© 2010 Raven Radke


Author's Note

Raven Radke
an old one as well

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So I relate to this in so many ways, it's not funny. Like, I'm being dead serious... This poem like slapped me in the face and told me to get over it. >.< Thanks. Amazing, amazing poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


this is a great poem.. but i want to know what ever happened to saying f**k them and being in angry love and not depressive love.... its way easier when your angry at them instead of wondering why in my opinion.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Raven Radke
Raven Radke

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So many people to meet and so many places to go, but time is to short for us to ever let our dreams happen If all we have is time on our hands then what are we missing? If all we have.. more..

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A Poem by Raven Radke