Spring is Here

My first haiku, inspired by the flowers I planted in my dorm room.

 Drawn to unseen warmth,

Silently, thin stems emerge

Facing the sunlight.

Reviews

[nadya]

very simple, nice, beautiful

[shythatway]

This was beautiful in it's simplicity. And a very good 1st :) You need to write more of these.

[Anastasia Starlena]

so true very beautifully written. I love thow flowers love to wake up to the sun.

[TapestryLange]

I love the way the growth comes across as silent yet so alive and kinetic. This haiku illuminates the marvelous potential inherent within the springtime. The use of "unseen" as an adjective describing "warmth" feels a bit awkward to me, but I think you've created a mood that is very sensory and extremely fresh. Thank you for sharing!