brokenhearted

i was going to give you the key

the key to my heart

but you couldn't wait

you broke the lock

took everything and dissapeared

leaving me behind

empty and brokenhearted

Author's Note

i hope it's good english XD

Reviews

[Furlie]

Omg.... there's nothing left to say -- :), very beautiful. U touched my heart :) :)

[the one who destructs e..]

man i know what you're talking about

[Expression]

goed geschreven :')

[~Qu33n B~]

That is beautiful. i love it. so short, sweet and to the point.

[Kristin Brecoe]

it's nicely written. my only suggestion is taking out the second line. you dont have to. but i think the reader already knows that you mean the key to your heart. if not. it just adds more in my opinion. do as you want.

[Dreamer (Kristen)]

goed geshreven, lekkere flow.

[Edalene Connell]

I like this! Great feeling in this poem.