time to let me go

time to let me go

A Poem by qaralynn

you carry me on your wings

like eagles carry their youngs

but it's time to let me fall

to let me fly on my own

 

don't be afraid to let me go

cause I'll come back to you

and then we'll fly together

side by side

 

 

 

 

© 2009 qaralynn


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Nice message, I suggest that you go back and look at your grammar. There are a few minor grammatical errors that take away from your writing.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love it!

Posted 14 Years Ago


short and straight to the point. it is hard for the parents to let their young ones go. so many worries and concerns that parents face. I do believe in the animal world all though they can't speak they feel the same way. but we all have to leave the nest and fend for ourselves. great write.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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