Sonrisas Para Ti

Sonrisas Para Ti

A Poem by Rachelle
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a love poem

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Spanish/Español

Por favor, escuchame, tengo una pregunta.
¿Que opinas de mi?
¿Como sientes cuando estamos juntos?
Ya sabes como siento.
Ya sabes que, te quiero.
Tal vez no sabes, pero te deseo.
¿Me quieres?
¿Me deseas?
Solo dime la verdad. Tengo mucha curiosidad.
Cuentame todo que sientes.
Quiero saber todo sobre tu vida.
Ahora y siempre quiero estar contigo y dar sonrisas para ti.

English/Ingles

Please, listen to me, I have a question.
What do you think of me?
How do you feel when we're together?
You already know how I feel.
You already know I love you.
Maybe you don't know this, but I want you.
Do you love me?
Do you want me?
Just tell me the truth. I'm very curious.
Tell me everything you feel.
I want to know all about your life.
Now and forever I want to be with you and give you smiles.

© 2010 Rachelle


Author's Note

Rachelle
It's rough, but Spanish isn't my first language, take that into account.

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The poem in English is very good. Spanish is a difficult language to write poetry for a person with limited skills. The Spanish verbs give away you are not a native. If you can learn to read Spanish with great skill. The Latino Poets are the best for romance and tenderness. Both poems were very good. We learn by a lot of practice and desire to be better.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Added on April 27, 2010
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Rachelle
Rachelle

Panajachel, Solola, Guatemala



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