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She isn’t the gold

You expected her to be.

Don’t you get sold

So easily.

 

She is Mercury-

She’ll creep up inside

Silently

And stay there to bide.

 

Once she attacks,

You have nowhere to hide

Even though you watch your back;

You can’t escape if you tried.

 

She will envelop you

In her sugar coated ways

And then inject her venom

Without a bit of trace.

 

Don’t be fooled

By her pretty little smile-

It’s just her tool

To exhaust a clever lie.

 

So when you think

You’re falling for her,

Before you sink,

Look into your mind deeper.

 

What you think is your golden ticket

Might just be a dangerous card.

What I say, don’t you forget-

Or she might just break another heart.

Reviews

[Manda]

wow this was excellent! you expressed this very well and putting some detail into it. the flow and grammar were excellent as well. well done!