Celestial

Celestial

A Poem by rachielle

Tonight, I look up and the sky is different.

Her luminous beauty, always taken for granted, is gloriously apparent-

With a dazzling shade of midnight blue,

Tonight, the night sky triggers a slightly different cue.

 

Beneath her, a translucent sheet of clouds spread,

Highlighted by artificial city lights ahead.

A cool, light breeze floats by

As the sparkling stars scatter up high.

Words can never grasp

Such a breathtaking sight.

 

Everything seems to fit right

On this astonishingly beautiful night-

Even when the moon is hiding,

The sky is continuously glowing.

 

Nothing could compare to something like this,

It’s like the magic of your first real kiss-

Life-changing, stunning, amazing.

 

During times like these,

I feel God’s hands painting colors

Onto the earth and all its wonders.

 

Maybe they just need us to notice,

To see them with eyes of innocence;

In order to bestow upon us an unexplainable bliss,

We must try to really see and feel their presence.

 

 

Tonight, I look up and the sky is different.

Her luminous beauty, always taken for granted, is gloriously apparent-

With a dazzling shade of midnight blue,

Tonight, the night sky triggers a slightly different cue.

© 2010 rachielle


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Rachielle like craig I do agree this is a glorious write. You must have been in a transcendental ambiance to capture these images. You have taken into me into the regions of theology (God), the cosmos (stars and heavens) anthropology (humans). I must say I enjoyed the pleasnt trip, thank you Rachielle!

Best regards,
Vincent

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is a glorious write, unveiling the beauty of the night sky and the wonder it brings alive.. A poem filled with such peace!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Great use of imagery in this poem. Well done.

Posted 14 Years Ago


a very beautiful poem, lovely, and yeah we need to admire nature and its beauty, well written , i really enjoyed reading it.....

Posted 14 Years Ago


Girl, This is truly amazing and ever so beautiful.
I like this alot. This just flows so wonderful.
You have talent.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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