H0w am I tooo....YOu

Carelessness of mine

You stole my dreams and burns it out

Ashes remains but you far away

careless mind of mine hurts you a lot

Knowing it I remain unchanged, didn't know y

Love for you resting in core I haven't tried to....

You remains same endless love, precious

Like a puppets mind waiting for instructions

I tied up my feelings and played the play

  LOVE 

Reviews

[Karmee]

I could feel the feelings in this write

[Nessly]

This is really sweet, although you may want to proofread it a bit.

[R@fban]

thank you.............

[Tessa Melendez]

A good piece. I like the similes you included in the end. Seems to be a nice love poem for someone you care so much about. I'm not entirely sure, but I think that's what it's about.

[R@fban]

you gussed it right......thank you