For You, My Love

"If loving you means war, I don't mind fighting 'til the very end."

Your name

Written in royalty

My name

Sculpted as ordinary

I feel flying

As you cross my line;

I am falling

Since you can’t be mine;

It might not be right

This love -- won’t recede

If the only thing to do is fight

On fate, I bid

Put up the war

My love is my shield;

Even my body’s in scar

For you, my love, I’ll break the walls they build.

 

Author's Note

I am bit rusty... It's been a long time since I've posted another poem.
So I hope this not sucks

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Love the way you portray love. A battle with shields, swords and pain. Excellent...:)....

[Rache David]

thanks sam.. :-) well,you know, love can fight and will fight if it has to.. :-)

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome...:).....

[Destiny Dreamer]

WOW! Beautifully written. AMAZING WORK... No doubt LOVE IS POWERFUL ... "Love makes people to take any risk" :)

[Rache David]

Thanks.. i'm glad you liked it.. :-)
love is indeed powerful.. it can overpower every one else. It can create and it can destroy.. :-) thanks again..

[Destiny Dreamer]

Yup :)) You are WELCOME! :))

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Love is powerful. There won't be hindrances as big as mountains. It will always find a way for two hearts to be united.

Well-done, Kabayan! Keep writing.

[Rache David]

:-).. thanks for that comment..
I'm moved.. :-)