3AM

3AM

The muted beat of a broken heart,

a heroic fight to heal the hurt.

Palms pressed in silent prayer,

bare knees into dampened dirt.

The silent whimper from quivering lips,

as tears fall like salted rain.

Mind manipulates memories past,

she finds redemption in the pain.

Rainee

Reviews

[poison&kerosene]

It is unbelievable how talented you are... It was short and sweet but so incredibly raw. Absolutely beautiful!

[Kelly Scheppers]

I remember being up all hours of the morning when I first started writing, quietly typing out my words on my smith corona. For some reason, it just seemed an appropriate time to get it all out.

"The muted beat of a broken heart..." Such a lovely opening, Rainee.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

It's amazing and heart melting as well. Why titled 3am? Any special reason behind that?

[Rainee Whiting]

It was 3AM when I scribbled the words onto a napkin :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Onto a napkin that too at 3am? Ohh God only a poetic heart can do that...
Great wrote my friend.

[Coyote Poetry]

Honest and true thoughts and emotions in the poetry. We need to mourn to heal. There is redemption in knowing pain. Thank you Rainee for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Rainee Whiting]

Thank you for reading me :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Rainee.