9 months

9 months

A Poem by raj24
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It’s about those great 9 months which unfortunately don’t count in our age but yes they are part of our journey to life.....

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9 months

 

One day I thought why not ask maa,

How she felt when I wasn’t in this world but a part of her heart,

How she felt during those nine months,

What were her feelings when she first felt me inside her womb?

And what were my heartbeats like when she heard them first beating alongside her heart?

 

She smiled and answered me in one word;

It was my REBIRTH, the rebirth of my soul,

I was not aware who is inside me;

Whether it’s a he or a she, but yes I knew I have to care for it.

 

I cared for you without touching you,

I felt your soul as if it’s just me not you,

I dreamt of holding you for long in my arms,

I wished to see you around me smiling all the time.

I touched my womb everyday to feel you grow,

I cried myself when you felt hungry inside me to ask for more.

 

When you first kicked me, I said HI,

You never replied, but I know, you smiled.

Those nights of pain, they are still here in my mind,

Today I’m smiling, talking to you, but believe me that was a tough time.

 

When you first came in this world, I hugged you tight,

You made me cry, you gave a new reason to live my life.

Those nine months today are like a story for me,

But they really changed who I used to be.

 

Today I’m your mother; you are a part of me,

We may be different today, but remember your soul is still a part of me,

You may have forgot to thank me for those nine months,

But I want to thank you for giving me those nine months.

 

RAJ

© 2019 raj24


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S.F
This poem is so beautiful. I have so much respect for people who respect and cherish their mothers, and this poem is just so soft and tender; forged of the unconditional love of a mother and her child. I loved it! I am looking forward for reading more! Great job.
~S.F

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raj24

10 Years Ago

thanks Salma.. i am glad you liked it.. i hope you will like my other works too..thanks for reading .. read more



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Beautifully written, you have a lot depth and emotion in your poems... They are so descriptive and when I'm reading them I can what you feel.. Not many people can express words so beautiful..

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raj24

5 Years Ago

Thanks for such kind words Tangie, I am glad you liked it and I am sorry for being so late to reply .. read more
Thank you for sharing Raj those nine months are very special in every woman's life. no more words but really great....

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raj24

5 Years Ago

:) Thanks Prabha..it always feel nice to know you liked my work :)
wow. u write things very beautifully. well expressed. 9 months we stay in her warm womb. beautiful !

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raj24

10 Years Ago

Thanks again Lioness.. i am glad you liked it..:)

Raj
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S.F
This poem is so beautiful. I have so much respect for people who respect and cherish their mothers, and this poem is just so soft and tender; forged of the unconditional love of a mother and her child. I loved it! I am looking forward for reading more! Great job.
~S.F

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

raj24

10 Years Ago

thanks Salma.. i am glad you liked it.. i hope you will like my other works too..thanks for reading .. read more
What I find remarkable, Raj, is your unique talent for utilizing incredible, heartfelt subjects and transforming them into such sometimes mind-blowing pieces of poetry. You give the reader, in each of your poems, something different to read - a powerful and profound theme about life. This is a very wonderful poem - very riveting, thought-provoking questions are raised that evoke a lot of emotion and sentiment concerning the connection between a mother and her child.

Thanks for the share.

W.H.

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raj24

10 Years Ago

i really dont have words to thank you for such nice words Hermitt...you always make me believe in my.. read more
Wall Hermitt

10 Years Ago

You're most welcome!
awww...that is such a pretty poem..more than a writer i respect you as a person because of the themes your poems have.... :) so beautiful...

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raj24

10 Years Ago

:)..i am glad you liked it Priya... i am honored that you felt that way..thanks :)..thanks for readi.. read more
priya

10 Years Ago

my pleasure raj...
Your topics are always intriguing... this is such a beautifully written piece of poetry indeed. What a mother feels toward her child even before he/she is born is extraordinary, and you captured the magic of that love with your beautiful words. What can I say, you are a true poetic genius. Bravo ! :)

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raj24

10 Years Ago

you are making me smile Norah..thanks for your wonderful reviews.. i am glad you liked it..thanks fo.. read more
Norah

10 Years Ago

Thanks for writing such great poetry!
Amazing talent you have or posses. You pick very relevant subjects and things that matter. This one is no exception...:)...................

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raj24

10 Years Ago

Thanks Sami...i am glad you liked it and thanks for such a wonderful review..i am honored by your wo.. read more
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:).....
Loved it. When I read the description I thought it was going to be from the point of view of the fetus, but I am glad you went this way with it. It really shows off how much a mother can love, even before we are born.

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raj24

10 Years Ago

Thanks Ashira...i am glad you liked it..i always thought of writing it from a mothers point of view... read more
Awee really captures a mommy's love for her baby. Makes you wonder if all mother's would agree that this is how they felt if not MORE. wonderful :)

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raj24

10 Years Ago

Thanks Summer i am you found it that way...thanks for reading and giving such a wonderful review..:).. read more
Summer Rose

10 Years Ago

you're very welcome! :) i only tell the truth!

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