What should I believe on

What should I believe on

A Poem by Rakesh Roushan
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what would you believe in when your beloved only has betrayed you....

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What should I believe on 
tell me please o...

I admired your sweetness
your heart was so clean I believed
that let me desire
you made me aspire

You were so innocent I thought
like perished by god's hands
you were so omnipresent and now also
to me in my heart and every land

But you broke me
I never thought you could do this
in that sweetness lurked
there lied the black heart
that black heart of yours
left me in perplexity
petrifying me so terribly

nothing but only chaos is left
the mutual understanding or whatever we had
I cant understand where it went

you pretend to be beauty queen
but I would say you are rather a flattered dream
you behave to be more supreme
far far from that you are a lost stream

I don't know what to believe on
I can't even imagine it could happen

and so well I pray for your being still
hoping to find you back as you were.....

© 2011 Rakesh Roushan


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A compelling write. Though I would suggest you go through it again to fix a few things that might feel out of place. Otherwise, its a beautiful piece. A sentiment I, and many others, can easily relate to.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Well donee

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is wonderfully conveyed, such fall with grace and chaos with bitter taste that we can only accept in some form, beautifully rendered xoxo

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Rakesh Roushan
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raipur, chhatisgarh, India



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