Imopectore

Dauntless I’am I have it in for love!
Deemed thy heart calloused when true love confide.
My heart stricken soul amidst cupid’s clap
Telling thy heart so shallow wanting instance.
Take counsel from thy impassive, irressistible trap.

Knowing a thing or two, love imp’d with wings
Like grubs proceed to bees with pointed stings
Such graceful prattle doesnt tend to amuse.
Seem tedious for thine love, oh you precieuse!

Lay to heart if thou takest love cast in pearls before swine.
Oh precieuse, swear not to sweet bosom’s charm
Thou didst let thy calloused heart reign and act so cynical
Oh swear not, sublime love in time won’t intertwine.

Author's Note

Written last june 2005,
Inspiration of this poem is catherine molina viray,
TRue love struck in an unexpected way, but when it does, the fact is, a girl may not even care about it? ------------> SWEAR NOT OH SUBLIME LOVE IN TIME WONT INTERTWINE!

Reviews

[Bard Constantine]

"From the heart"... no doubt. This has an old world feel, a Gothic undertone to it. Personally, I'm not quite sure the thickness of the Old English does more to restrict the poem than enhance it. Just a thought. Nicely done, overall.

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this is magnificent--i love the style-the antediluvian mood-
feels like the dark ages of love''s contemptuous ways at times-
this entire poem reads so well...i love it...

james:-)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this poem. In the style of a William Blake poetry. Strong words that moved with passion and great strength. Never be the master of love. Must be give and take with no losers. Only good memories and shared victories. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

there is definetly a medieval/gothic atmosphere moving through this engaging write you've created~ well done!~

[Dinesh Sairam]

Since I've read quite some of your poems, I must say. You repeat words too often in your writes. As I think - You get a brainstorm on some word and you start thing about it. When you start writing, you just repeat it too much ('thy' here). And archaic words sure adds to the effect, but when mishandled, shuns the imagery. Monotony is something not related to poetry (Refrain is different from monotony).

Some words and lines stood out. Kudos for that. Keep writing.