Eternal Song

Eternal Song

A Poem by Break The Broken

Eternal Song

I don’t want this song to ever end

I want you close to me forever

I'm starting to descend

We’re falling in love together

You lips press against mine

And I swear it stops all time

We dance

Spin slightly

To this song endlessly

This song that will last for an eternity

 

I don’t believe in true love

But, baby, this is close enough

All I know is that this feels right

Me

You

Here

Now

Dancing

To this song endlessly tonight

© 2011 Break The Broken


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beautiful and gentle.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Concept is beautiful. Flows a little off. But still very impressive.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Forever...
Great write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Break The Broken
Break The Broken

Cranston, RI



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