Thinking of you

Lie here by myself

Afternoon breeze blowing over my shoulder

Lovebirds singing rhythms of soothing music

Hearing their voices cry out to me

 

Wondering

Yearning

Hoping

Waiting

For us to be together

 

Do you feel the same way

Am I crazy

Thinking

Of you

Your touch

Your caress

Your laughter

Your smile

 

Wondering

Yearning

Hoping

Waiting

For that moment

That we shall be together

 

Am I dreaming

Am I crazy

Am I insane

 

When

Where

How

 

Thinking

Wondering

Hoping

 

That you feel the same way

Only time will tell

 

Reviews

[Crinkle°]

Beautiful.

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Wow.. really deep passion and strong yearning emotions pouring out.. loved the flow.. could strongly feel a hungering desire here to the very core of a deep and moving individual soul. A sense of waiting on a love so tender and true.. but pondering if you are crazy for feeling this.. does the other feel the same way? Could they possibly know or feel the way you feel without knowing you feel that way? I sometimes wonder myself how many think this way in life.. dredging through life.. pausing to reflect on a great love loss.. sad if it's true.. and by my experiences it sometimes is. It takes two to make beautiful music.. on such a high note.. sometimes words do need to be shared.. to feel the depth of another soul. I loved the honesty pouring out here.. the fire which resides within this write is incredible and makes one think! =)

[Tenten]

I enjoyed this one, its spans variation relationship moments and the feelings are inside these words.