In the dead of night

In the dead of night

A Poem by Rayzor


In the dead of night. Tucked under the cover.
Ants crawling up my spine. Afraid of what I might discover.

In the closet of my bedroom. Something I cannot hear.
But in there in the dark, there's something to fear.

Something hiding. Something grinning.
Something rising. Something chilling.

It's coming. I want to scream.
I open my eyes. It was only a dream.


© 2013 Rayzor


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Twist of turn, I like how it builds up towards the end! Very clever, yet simple. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


this is a chilling nightmare. i like the surprise ending. great job.

Posted 6 Years Ago


It was great until the ending. You did well, but the "dream" endings make me feel like I just threw away my time, and got interested in nothing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


an awesome piece, i love the rhyme scheme in here. well done Rayzor

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rayzor

6 Years Ago

Thanks man :)
costa siwale

6 Years Ago

with poems like this! you are totally welcome lol
A good rhyming poem...Bravo..........................

Posted 6 Years Ago


Rayzor

6 Years Ago

Thanks Sami :)
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)...............

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Rayzor
Rayzor

Moss, Ostfold, Norway



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