I Miss The Man I Wanna Be

A heartfelt moment in my life at the passing of my father.

I miss the Man I wanna be

The one who taught me everything

To catch and throw, to cast and row

To shift and clutch, to love God so much

I miss my Dad every day

I never thought he'd go away

I miss the man I'm trying to be

To give and love unselfishly

These and more the best I can

To be like my Father

To be a better Man

Reviews

[Leo]

A sweet selfless beautiful write..may he RIP

[Lord of mad men]

Very nice! If you are want to be a better man that makes you a better man because you want to improve yourself for others.

[Gray]

Excellent poetry. Our father guides us to the right course in life if he's a good one. In your case, he clearly was.

You're very good.