Dear Anyone

This is a letter in a poetic form. It is an orphaned girl struggling in her life calling for help. Would you help her?

Dear Anyone

Dear Anyone

How is your life?

How are you doing?

What do you see for your future?

Do you know what love is?

Dear Anyone

My life is cold and hungry.

I am dying inside.

I have no job nor home.

Please tell me why?

Dear Anyone

I am doing just fine,

NO, I am lying to you.

I am a lonely orphan.

People tell me to shoo.

Dear Anyone

My future is desolate and dry.

Nothing waits for me there.

I don’t go to school

Because nobody cares.

Dear Anyone

What is love?

I know it is a feeling.

Could you teach me love

Or are you even willing?

Dear the person who read this

Who am I to you?

I could be your neighbor for all you know.

Could you help me please?

Let your kindness show.

I am calling out for help,

But still I drown alone.

Please oh please

Pick up the phone.

I am hurt and weak,

But do you care?

Do you wonder why I addressed this to anyone?

Because I am somewhere alone.

Help me.

Heal me.

Care for me.

Love me.

Sincerely, The hurting girl

Author's Note

Any thoughts on this?

Reviews

[CAPOLAVORO]

This line puch me the most.

"Dear the person who read this
Who am I to you?
I could be your neighbor for all you know.
Could you help me please?
Let your kindness show."

Good write! Maybe I am just used to poems which has solid connections but witherway yours was good to read. I love the emotion on this one. Keep writing. :)

[wordman]

oh,i`m sure some one cares

[Richard simpson]

There is a deepness and a thought provoking struggle between what is good and what is evilly depressed. This poem is deeper than the river of Jordan. I can't express true meaningful words to describe how I feel about this. It is, "Beautiful".

[Stacy Purvis]

I absolutely love this. It sounds like a short monologue, like the ones we used to whip up in Public Speaking
"Dear the person who read this..."
Consider changing to "Dear Person reading this".
Otherwise, I love it.
Thank you for sharing!

[Aubrey Harrell]

Thank you for reading this! I appreciate the tip, but if I changed up the words then how could it be from the heart. Sometimes life gets hard and right now this poem is how I am feeling a little bit. Most of it isn't even true like orphan and no future, but hurting girl is.

[Stacy Purvis]

It's the grammar which needs to be correct for the reader.

[Mr.Writer]

This poem was well worded and made the readers emphatise for the girl! It was very emotional and some lines stuck out to me such as...
"I am calling out for help,
But still I drown alone. "
These lines did the job and the drowning part sounded so different and interesting.
Well done Aubrey!
Great job!

[Aubrey Harrell]

Thank you. I only wrote from the heart not really sure what it all means yet myself, but I appreciate the review! :)

[Mr.Writer]

No problem! :)