Needing Him

Needing Him

A Poem by Red Rose

salvation process.

Waiting, waiting, waiting...
In the dark.
Solitary. swimming in shadows.
I can't do it, and I can't understand,
Why is your absense so heavy?
I am me. Myself.
And I can't do this.
I ready for your presence.
Shine on me now.

© 2010 Red Rose

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Very nice. It is similar to a poem I posted but yours uses a short length to get the message across. Great job!

Posted 5 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well written. We always try to fight for ourselves, but in the end Jesus is the one who helps.

Posted 9 Years Ago

If you ever surfed writerscafe then you would notice the long lengths of everything. Now this is different because it s shorter but still I pretty much liked it.=)

Posted 10 Years Ago

What genre is this? I want to understand what you are meaning in this but I know you are dependent. Good write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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5 Reviews
Added on March 9, 2010
Last Updated on March 9, 2010
Tags: salvation, christ, christian, depending, Jesus, God, myself, me


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