Needing Him

Needing Him

A Poem by Red Rose

salvation process.

Waiting, waiting, waiting...
In the dark.
Solitary. swimming in shadows.
I can't do it, and I can't understand,
Why is your absense so heavy?
I am me. Myself.
And I can't do this.
I ready for your presence.
Shine on me now.

© 2010 Red Rose

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Very nice. It is similar to a poem I posted but yours uses a short length to get the message across. Great job!

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well written. We always try to fight for ourselves, but in the end Jesus is the one who helps.

Posted 13 Years Ago

If you ever surfed writerscafe then you would notice the long lengths of everything. Now this is different because it s shorter but still I pretty much liked it.=)

Posted 14 Years Ago

What genre is this? I want to understand what you are meaning in this but I know you are dependent. Good write.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Posted 14 Years Ago

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5 Reviews
Added on March 9, 2010
Last Updated on March 9, 2010
Tags: salvation, christ, christian, depending, Jesus, God, myself, me


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