FRIEND

- how a friend tried to realize how really important her best friend is.

Teardrops of you might fall unto me
And the eyes of you could carry me
Though it seems you might have be no sight

Seeing you in the dark you still fight.

The heart of me heals of you my friend
Guilt and loneliness out 'cause it blends
Be with you might be accidentally
But this is where I long to be.

Kidding me so next laughter at all
That those thorns then everyday fall
At first accepting me by you I'm not sure
 The heart of us now combined to shore.

Since our dearest friendship exist
Just like Internet which can't resist
How really blessed I am to have you,
Grateful to measure a kind of friend!

 

Author's Note

This poem is dedicated to my best friend.

Reviews

[Levi Levin]

Nothing hardly better than a friend. There's one that sticketh closer than a brother.

[CreativeStroke]

"Though it seems you might have be no sight" The word 'be' seems out of place in this line. not sure if it was worded incorrectly or that it just needs removed.

"Be with you might be accidentally" I think this line would read better if you wrote it like this, "Being with you might be accidental." That is purely a suggestion though. This is your writing and you can write it however you please.

Anyway, this was a beautiful tribute to your best friend and I am sure she greatly appreciates you writing this for her. Well done with this piece!

[Levi Levin]

This was an an excellent writing. Truly from the heart, and as long as your heart speaks, nothing else really matters. Great job!

[mhaie]

Thanks.

[Levi Levin]

Your welcome