Jitter Buggin'

Jitter Buggin'

A Poem by redzone
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....Chuck Berry rocks..

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Jitter Buggin’

“Oh Carol,
don’t let him steal your heart away,
I’m gonna learn to dance
if it takes me all night and day.”
~~Chuck Berry 
~~~~

1957
you drove that cherry red Chevy coupe,
327 and 4 on the floor,
ChucK Berry coming through your door.
“Oh Carol”
you steppin’ out
to dance tonight!
~~~~
Come on Carol,
there’s a little juke joint
just down the road a way,
so lets go baby
cause when you arrive
the whole place comes alive
and everyone wants to dance and play.
~~~~
Tight pants and swayed out skirts
fill the music
with rock-n-roll jams, and
“I got my eyes on you baby,
cause you dance so good”.
“Oh Carol”
you’re stealin’ my heart away.
And I’m toe tappin’
hip swayin’,
jitter buggin’
the night away.

Aztec Warrior/redzone 5.10.16
NOTE: the quoted lines are from the Chuck Berry
song “Oh Carol” 
  

© 2016 redzone


Author's Note

redzone
...thanks for reading..


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I admit, not too familiar with CB's work, but since I'm the youngest of 9, I was checking out this scene ("tight pants & swayed out skirts") in a periphery way, longing to be in my older sibling's world, but I was obliged to stay home & go to bed early. Your poem brings back the innocent flirtations of group dancing get-togethers & I love the last 4 lines (((HUGS)))

Posted 7 Years Ago


Nice way to incorporate the song -- a great piece.

Posted 7 Years Ago


redzone

7 Years Ago

glad you liked KL, thank you, but it was all chuck berry's doing I was just toe tappin.... lol
Yup, way way fun!
Who can resist tapping and snapping along to chuck berry.


Posted 7 Years Ago


redzone

7 Years Ago

Oh Ana, don't let him steal your heart away.. lol thanks for the toe taps and finger snaps to Chuck .. read more

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