Princess [UNTITLED]

The title wasn't a real one.....That's right....I lied....

I see you standing there

The moonlight in your hair

 

Your lips so blood red

Your skin so soft and pale

And hair so raven black

 

Don’t leave me here,

I fear you won’t come back

 

Night’s tears stream from your eyes

And blood flows down my chest

A silver face, the midnights crest

Mother Moon begins to cry

 

I reach out for your ice cold hand

Fall Victim of this lifeless land

 

My heart, it beats with steady pain

I see your eyes and want to live again

 

Have I another life to lend?

I hold your hand until the end.

Author's Note

Any title suggestions?

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

Here is a title suggestion: Midnight's Face. I love the dark richness to the poem. I am a lover paranormal stories, books, and poems. This poem is beautifully dark and you carried it threw till the end.

[there is no more from m..]

wow that was an amazing poem :-) well done

[Luke Masters]

Beautiful. I love this. It really is beautiful. The trouble with writing a review for a poem, is normally I don't have enough to say to get more than 1 point. I said it all with the first sentence. Ha. Anyway - I really liked this. Give us more.

[Tori]

Incredible. Once again the mystic, tortured, romantic picture you paint with your poetry is exquisite!! I mean, each time I read your stuff, it's like I'm actually there, observing the moment. I can actually feel the emotion and the power behind it all. Amazing job, my friend. Amazing job.

[Raven Wilson]

Radiance
I loved this poem, the gentle rhyming really brings out the subtle messaging I can feel resonating in this poem. very well written.