The Rise and Fall of Edward Noir

Time closes as my life moves forward while in a portal surrounded by hate and shame

Time waits for the foolish while the wisest of our fine intellectuals Suffer into the deep omenious spiral transgress

An intellectual surrounded by judgment Friendship with oppression

Tools of bureaucrats Used by a Succubus as time passes by I still try to hold in my sanity

Its a sore pity the lovers of our time traveling Aristocrat leaves the portal with knife in his back

A slight sense of discomfort came forth upon as the traveler never finds what he wishes and dreams to find

Respect

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

A little short for the emotional expression, re worked it could be something.