Can I not be your friend?

about a girl who love a guy and this guy love another girl.

Don’t write a letter that you like me

Don’t say a word that you miss me

Making those mushy words won’t change anything.

 

You love her isn’t it?

More than anyone else

More than anything

 

This love is new to you

But for me, this is twice

You don’t need to smile

And lie about the truth

 

Say the truth...

Never lie...

Love her...

Forget me...

It is better to be like this

 

Letting me go can give me freedom

Not loving you is my freedom

 

Go away

And can I not be your friend?

Author's Note

Comments?
Note: This poem is based on a song titled "Can I Not Be Your Friend?" by S.H.E
Here's the link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Iq7jEecukZo

Reviews

[rielovella]

@Tate Morgan When I wrote this, I keep on thinking if I shouldn't be his friend but I chose to be his friend rather to lose our friendship forever. Thanks for the advice. :)

[Tate Morgan]

That is prophetic However If I can add a bit of advice dont try the friend thing with one who wounds you

[J]

I liked it :] It was so sad and passionate

[maryjaneuy]

aw.. you're being hopeless romantic. :|
this poem shows too much sadness. still, it's cute. :)

[livinglifeloud]

Say the truth...
Never lie...
Love her...
Forget me...
It is better to be like this

I really like that