Happiness beyond Sadness

I made this to cheer up someone. I hope that he did really smiled after reading this.

A happy person sees light beyond darkness.

A happy person sees rainbow beyond the raindrops.

A happy person smiles at his problems.

Everyone admires his happiness.

But deep inside, he is lonely.

Not all people understand his real self.

When he smiles, he's sighing.

When he's joking, he's cheering himself.

The real "him" hides in a mask.

No one knows how sad he is

Compare to those who are sad from the start.

Maybe he's keeping it in his heart.

For he knows that,

Sadness won't be helped at all.

Author's Note

Any comments or suggestions?

Reviews

[Tomi]

at the beginning, i get the idea of happiness as being positive and seeing the good side of life, then at some point there is a total turn around as though the happiness isn't real but just a facade...you lost me there (line 5)....you might want to take a look.

you doing good, keep writing

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This is a very good piece. Not everyone wants to show their true self out their...they just fake emotions because they don't want others to know what they are going through. So many people fake emotions and they don't want you to see through the disguise...but someone will always be able to break through to them...and you know a happy person maybe happy...but they all feel other emotions as well. Thanks for sharing.

[Kelly M.]

Very happy and sweet! Great write and keep writing! :)