I've Wish

A Poem by Revolved

I've Wished

A poem by Rachel

I've wished I'll shined like a star,

I've shone no brighter than a candle.

I've wished I'll soar like an eagle,

I've only jump like a cricket.

I've wished I'm perfect like God,

but I know no one can out shine

or soar past

Him.

© 2011 Revolved

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ScarlettTheDreamer

Beautiful. Simple, gentle, peaceful, yet so beautiful!

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Added on July 8, 2010
Last Updated on November 25, 2011
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July 8, 2010

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Revolved

North East Philly!!!, PA

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