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For the 1st day of Spring...

Hint of colour

In the air

Morning glories

Lift their heads

Southern breezes

Whisper low

Urging them

From winter beds.

Now the earth

Is tinged with green

Birds and bees

And butterflies

Open up

The secret box

With its ancient,

New surprise.

Reviews

[wordman]

I can almost smell the apple blossoms,spring in all it`s glory

[...]

I love the breeze urging the wake from winter hibernation. Beautiful, Marie :)

[Marie]

THank you.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

each spring is a new surprise, a rebirth ....and it makes people feel a kind of rebirth from the deathly throes of winter.

nicely done, Marie.

[Marie]

Yes...though spring comes every year, it always seems new.

[Helena]

Ahhh Spring....my favourite time of the year! You have penned this charming tribute to it with wonderful imagery. Truly beautiful Marie!

[Marie]

Thank you. I guess it's time to begin posting spring poems.

[Helena]

Absolutely Marie! I hope your spring over there is better than your winter! We are supposed to be in autumn, but still so hot!
Come and join in the challenges at TBRC Marie if you feel inclined. Would love to have you there!

Kind regards,

Helena :)

[Woody]

I said it before. I'll say it again, nobody describes nature better than you marie. the words you choose are sumptuous. your rhyme and rythm are of course impeccable.

[Marie]

Thank you. I wish I had used a bigger font; I didn't realize how it was going to come out.

[ANTO]

It is divine Marie - penned from divine inspiration. The words 'ancient New surprise' made me go wow.
Great to see the Spring poems open up like the flowers all around. Thank you for posting this.
:)

[Marie]

I had planned on posting a story today, but decided not to let the first of Spring go by without notice.

[Jamestown]

Beautiful write! Very nice flow and calming, peaceful and pretty picture!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Marie]

Thank you.