4am

sleep reality.

I've dreamt of dreams like these.

Where I wake up and I am the Eiffel tower burning inside the sea.

Shall we set this city a blaze?

I've dreamt of dreams like these.

Where my teeth fall out like type writer keys,

and the mass of people cover the streets,

painting them like black lined thieves,

and stealing our dreams.

Trying so hard

 to remember these things.

Oh I've dreamt of dreams like these.

Edgar Perez.

Author's Note

simple dreams, intersting dreams.

Reviews

[Bob Sherunkle]

Very powerful.Short and painted a very vivid picture.One of my favourites.

[sweetred]

Do you really dream about things like these?, because if you have trust me you will become a very successful poet. This was simple but with so much meaning

[Edgar Perez]

Thank you so much! and yes, actually I wrote this at 4am. I was at a friends house and that night, I ended up crashing over. I fell in a deep slumber. when I awoke these scenarios in perfect vision graced me to be written down. shortly after I wrote them down, I was at peace. So thank you so much for the review and encouraging words! (:

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

I am a dreamer, too. I love to dream...good dreams. Don't let anyone steal your dreams from you.

Nice poem.

[Edgar Perez]

Thank you! I love dreaming, It's definitely beautiful!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

You're welcome.