The humming bird’s gift

The humming bird’s gift

 

A humming bird landed on my shoulder,

It whispered a story in my ear.

 

It told me of how sweet love could be,

If only I opened my heart to hear.

 

Would my heart beat faster I asked.

The humming bird told me it would beat like no other.

 

My blood would burn with passion,

My desires would be hers.

 

Tell me sweet humming bird; do not toy with my heart,

Could my heart find love after being cold for so long?

 

The humming bird smiled and flew off in the wind.

 

As I turn to walk away,

I find you reading what I wrote.

Reviews

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

I have the same sentiment in your line "Could my heart find love after being cold for so long?" You remembered my mail, right? Haha. This is cool, Ron. I love how you ended this piece, too. Quite a humor. :)

[ron]

Your welcome Blue. Yes I did. :)

[FlatLineBeauty]

This was just the sweetest write. It was enjoyed Ron. xo Winter

[ron]

Thank you Winter I am happy you enjoyed it. xo

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

This is a lovely write with a perfect (and unexpected!) ending. Well done!

[ron]

Thank you Sharon.

[s y e]

Ron, i am such a huge fan of you! Your writes are amazing and always have me hooked, when I go to tackle my RR's I look for your name so I can read you first, lol. Amazing write.

[ron]

Thank you very much. I am honored that you consider my writing so well.

[s y e]

Always a pleasure. :-)

[M. Stein]

Wow, this is beautiful. It makes me want to love. This is beautifully written

[ron]

Thank you.

[Ruth]

This is beauty! Enjoyed hon...very powerful x

[ron]

Thank you Silver.

[shallimarRose]

"The humming bird smiled and flew off in the wind.
As I turn to walk away,
I find you reading what I wrote."

Ron this last line is amazing. It opens the poem up to so many possibilities..
This is one fantastic piece.. shallimarRose

[ron]

Thank you so much Rose. I wanted the reader to be a part of the poem.

[Sheila Kline]

Oh, this is so beautiful!! The idea of a humming bird flitting by and inspiring you is delightful.........and the ending is perfect!!
Another lovely write!!

[ron]

Thank you Sheila. I blush at your review.

[Laminators Dubai]

wow!
i loved it!
end was unexpected but best ever.
awesome !
thanks for sharing Ron ^^

[ron]

You are most welcome glitch.

[Kelly Scheppers]

They are such a delight to watch, aren't they? You've captured their fascination with this endearing poem, Ron!

[ron]

Thank you Kelly. yes they are :) xo