Could it have been the cold dark night?

Could it have been the cold dark night?

A Poem by ron
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Yes I know its the same song. But the song is a powerful one. "barmaid" captcha. I couldn't make this up.

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Could it have been the cold dark night?

 

 


In the cantina he sat,

in the candle light he waited.

 

Was it for love or honor,

no one will ever know.

 

At the table…

he never looked up.

 

He just poured the last drop of courage into his glass.

 

The doors pushed open,

and twelve of them walked in and took their place.

 

He sipped down the last drop,

and tilted the brim of his hat up.

 

“Come with us and there won’t be any trouble” was what they said.

 

He knew it was a kangaroo court he had to face,

and that just would do.

 

Six shots in his gun was all he had,

no one would think less of him if just gave up.

 

But that was not his way,

slowly he stood.

 

He pulled his watch from his pocket,

opened it and reflected on the picture on the inside of the cover.

 

“This is for you”

he said as a tear fell and faded his love.

 

Drawing his gun with lightning speed,

six fell before the first shot was heard.

 

A Roar of two more was heard before the stranger moved,

one more fell to a knife in his chest.

 

The other three stood frozen unable to move,

but guns they drew,

how brave they must have felt before to the ground they sank.

 

No one knows why the stranger loved her,

the w***e of the town.

 

On a cloudy rainy night you might hear the cry of the stranger,

as his love placed a knife into his back.

 

© 2014 ron


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Wow, Ron, this is very dark for you. Sadly, I must say, it is a pretty damned good tale.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Brittany

10 Years Ago

LOL BUT THE ENDING WAS GOOD
ron

10 Years Ago

Thank you om.
Brittany

10 Years Ago

your welcome
wow love makes you do crazy things even killing your lover is included

Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

Thank you, yes it can.
This projected a movie of all those western films I watched when I was a kid, I pictured that bar, and the dozen walking in.
Well done buddy.

Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

Thank you Noel.
She killed him????? Or did I get it wrong.I hope I got it wrong.

Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

You know what calling me good boy does to me ;) lol
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

Oh.... I know ;)
ron

10 Years Ago

;) lol....

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I have been writing on and off or more years than i care to remember. I started writing poetry, than i started a novel (still in the works), now I'm writing a six part short story erotic.. more..

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