~quintessence of my heart's surrender

~quintessence of my heart's surrender

A Poem by Frieda P
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Shoop Shoop

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 I breathe your burning essence,
     blinded in sight's enchantment
      of moon's propositioning the sun
a percolating brew of beckoning temptation,
  awakens the head spinning senses of delirium
could sell a tender soul in random abstract yearnings,
 frenzied winds of fiery  lit crystal clear pools of clarity  
   & wildflower meadows of nature's instinctual remedy
rendering me speechless in awe filled consumption
  of abundant smoky, salty tears reverence
         lavished in a symphony of elation's rush
   rising simultaneous as paroxysm's embraces
           lulling me onto weak knee's breathlessness
    exhaling in synergistic consummation's exultation
                     quintessence of my heart's surrender

                                                                   

© 2014 Frieda P


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OMG!! ... I'm so in love with this... it's the way you surrender!.... it's heartbreaking, all consuming, and piercing all at the same time... it hurts to love but soooo worth it to give your heart...

...and Robin Thicke is heartachingly beautiful...(his voice too) ;)

Mesmerizing work of art, Friedalicious!!~xoxo~

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Frieda, do you choose the song and then write the poem that comes to you after? Your poetry is perfect for this one, my friend. You amaze me. Thanks again.

Posted 5 Years Ago


A deeply meaningful piece of writing.
Really loved this poem.

Posted 5 Years Ago


frenzied winds of fiery lit crystal clear pools of clarity

Favorite line. Sometimes it is hard to let oneself surrender, but in this you make it sound so appealing and take away the usual fear of bearing your weaker side in front of someone. Absolutely stunning dear.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Another paean to love, beautifully expressed. Who needs a Word of the Day app when Freida sends you requests.
Well done ma'am.

Posted 6 Years Ago


I really think your word usage is some of the best I've read in a while, definitely up in my favorites. I think it's great, the flow is amazing. I find myself inspired

Posted 6 Years Ago


You have a way with words. I love the flow and the imagery! Stunning!

Posted 6 Years Ago


OMG!! ... I'm so in love with this... it's the way you surrender!.... it's heartbreaking, all consuming, and piercing all at the same time... it hurts to love but soooo worth it to give your heart...

...and Robin Thicke is heartachingly beautiful...(his voice too) ;)

Mesmerizing work of art, Friedalicious!!~xoxo~

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think this poem is the literary equivalent of dancing naked I the cool light of a bright moonlight night.
There is a sense of vulnerability and freedom here.
I felt the plunge into the clear waters of expression distorted by the ripples of desire.
Refreshing read!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

*Smiling* here, best compliment a poem could get, dancing naked, just my cuppa tea haha ;) You're t.. read more
 David Scott

6 Years Ago

I am cute... Ha.
Glad you noticed.
Do you like the dimples? ;)
To be lost like the below lines.
"Lavished in a symphony of elation's rush
rising simultaneous as paroxysm's embraces
lulling me onto weak knee's breathlessness"
If we knew the emotion of the symphony of a untamed love. We have find paradise. No weakness in the outstanding poetry dear Frieda.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Thanks for your kind words Coyote, untamed love and paradise, sounds good to me....
I see with most of your poetry, it's about words. I feel you rely too much on your words and are too particular with them. At times, I'm lost in the words, lulled by sirens. So much that, I have no idea what you are writing about and come out of the poem, like a maze, glad that I made it out alive. It sounds nice but I don't know, for me, I got nothing out of it. It's well written, but I couldn't feel what you felt, because the words got in the way, for me.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

I do adore my words, you're making it much more complicated than it is, sorry if you didn't
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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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