I hide inside my self

I hide inside my self

 

 

Who am I to hide within your heart?

To hide within the scars and the heart beats?

 

Do I have the right to shelter you from the moonlight of pain,

or the demons that haunt you?

 

What we are is shown in the light of stars that shine so bright.

Your love is woven within the fabric of who I am on a full moon.

 

I offer my heart on the altar of your love,

my scars pledged for your love.

 

My pain shall be comforted by your love,

soothed with your tender touch.

 

Could you or will you love me,

beyond the moon and stars?

 

Will you be my savior of love?

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

We all deserve someone to love as well as having someone love us. Love takes time, but you must be ready to open yourself up, unravel all your secrets and doubt. If we don't love ourselves, it's hard for others to love us. No one wants to do damage control and nor is it easy. It's exhausting and draining, stressful even. Not all love is perfect, but it's worth everything once you've found the right one.

[ron]

I agree and thank you Svetlana.

[MandaBear]

Such a sweet poem. I hope I can find someone that I can be this poem and he can be this poem for me. Great job!

[ron]

Thank you Manda.

[John Jor]

I really like the imagery conjured by your choice of metaphors!

[ron]

Thank you very much John.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

So full of emotion this was beautiful Ron I read it more than once

[ron]

Thank you so very much Samantha. I hope all is going good with you.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

You are welcome been dealing with drama here and trolls but its all good now I was just talking to charlie the mod and I feel much better

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

I hope all is well with you

[ron]

Im happy to hear things are getting better for you, I'm sorry about the drama.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Falling in love again! Your poem is beautiful. Whomever has caught your heart is lucky as you describe true love.

[ron]

Thank you. I'm the lucky one.