Passion at the edge

Passion at the edge

 

 

Was it the way your body moved as you lay sleeping,

was it your scent that clarified my passion and inundated the sheets,

or was it my own desires that compelled me to kiss you softly?

 

You stirred with each soft kiss,

I placed upon your naked body.

 

The moonlight caressed the edges of your soul,

as my fingers softly traced each curve of your beauty.

 

My tears of love made heart shaped droplets,

lovingly planted across your skin,

that I prayed would find their way to your heart.

 

I closed my eyes and inhaled all of who you are,

I savored each sensation as if it were the last moments of my life.

 

Afraid to open my eyes I fall asleep,

and awake to an empty bed.

Reviews

[Charligal]

So,sensual, and vivid imagery. It painted an erotic picture.

[ron]

Thank you Charligal ;)

[MandaBear]

I really liked this. Very sensual. great job!

( I do have to say I think you meant "fell asleep" instead of "feel asleep" other than that it was great!!)

[ron]

Thank you Manda...oops, lol your right I did thank you.

[MandaBear]

You're welcome my friend! Still over all one of my favorite poems you have written!

[ron]

Thank you Manda. I actually changed the last stanza...

Afraid to open my eyes I fall asleep,
and awake to an empty bed.

[MandaBear]

Still great work as always! Talented you are!

[ron]

Thank you Manda. So are you.

[MandaBear]

Thank you very much

[ron]

You are most welcome.

[Nikki]

Seductive and loving. A passionate showing of deep adoration. The spell of being wholly in love. It is quite magical. Great read Sir.

[ron]

Thank you Nikki, your words are very kind.