This one does know that he does'nt

Instant

Rambling mind, mumbling brook,

Grumbling behind is the crook!

This one does know that he doesn't,

That one doesn't know he does!

Mind, brook, crook...all bundled together,

Huddled in the canvas of a cyber-book!

This one does know that it isn't,

That one doesn't know that is!

Gambling man, pauper prince,

Naughty fan, Fish without fins,

This one doesn't know what he got,

That one does know what not!

Planet x, Quasar Max,

 Internet-fax, Skip your tax,

Tear your cheques, Straighten your backs, 

Stow the racks, clear the decks,

Pack the smacks, save your Lakhs,

Scare the hacks, jump the Jacks,

Clap the claps, route the maps,

Sleep your naps, help your paps,

greet your chaps, say your raps,

miss the slaps, shut the taps, 

Stop the yaps, give 'em zaps!

They don't know what you are up to,

You do know whatever you have to!

Author's Note

My worse!

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Ah...it was fun to read...you ever listen to some of Bob Dylan's rhymes? They are awful! But at times interspersed with brilliance and always fun. I've been listening to Dylan all morning cleaning house. Neil Young was right, "A Man Needs a Maid!" lol

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Oh Fabian how are you...settled in a new home comfortably now i hope!
Dylans knockin on heavens door awright...lol...
and a new maid shall you be gifted for Christmas from the stars!
Thanks you thank you

[Sarah McKeever Hitt]

This was the first thing I read this morning and I have to say it was really fun to read. The lines- This one does know that he doesn't, That one doesn't know he does! will be with me for a long time. Nice job. Thank you for writing this.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Abundant blessings to the one called Sarah from the one!:)

[Becky C Strukamp]

Many words combined displaying many a thought. A unique poem.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

hi Inyrdreams...how are you?...its so good to hear from you again.

[Becky C Strukamp]

Doing pretty good Kiddo! thanks for asking..how are you?

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

am great too:) cheers

[Becky C Strukamp]

good to hear my friend! :)

[Nupur]

sometimes worse is enjoyable by others, and when u make people enjoy its worth a lot........ gud one

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Thx Nupur.namaste:)

[Ruth]

Blimey :) What a reel, been a while since I read you and I see you still hold a potent flow :)
Really enjoyed :)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Wherever have you been my dearest:)

[Ruth]

Here there and all over lol

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

all over whom

[Ruth]

Life

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

whose

[Ruth]

Mine

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

:)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Whatever!
(I know you may say)