None of business

I shouldn't be doing this

WHY DO I POKE MY NOSE IN YOUR AFFAIRS,

IT'S NONE OF MY BUISINESS,

YET I DO...KNOWING  YOU ARE PART OF ME!

Author's Note

Give your harshest criticism please! Thx

Reviews

[Silhouette]

I can't think of anything harsh to say about this piece, because I think it's really good. Maybe a little short, but I'm one of those people who like poems with a little more length. Yet I alo think it's a talent to get the message across using as little words as possible, and this really shows what great talent you have. Great job.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Thank you Sil...i tried to dothat thxx

[quinfinn]

speaks volumes with few words....mission accomplished. large colored font was a real kicker and made the message shout out loud, maybe a little too loudly but effective!

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

thx quinfinn power-packed dynamite internal combustion:)

[Constance Payne]

interesting

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

thx :)

[Ahmad Cox]

I really like it actually.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

i do too:) thx

[jacob erin-cilberto]

less is more...i like what this says...not fond of the colored font and the size of it....i think the words should speak for themselves without the glitz in font.

no need, because this is a good short piece.

jacob

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Thank you sir, yes your words are true!

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

This is thought provoking, good piece of work. Makes us ponder, you were involved... lol

- Elisa

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

i was.....lol
thxx

:D yw friend

[Muse]

SMack me in the face with a sign and leave me bruised and blinded. Obnoxious..but point taken.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

lol Muse u never cease to amuse me

[InsanityWriter]

Nice. :) It's a very good question... (;

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

hi yeh thanku Insane

[Nick.B]

This had a more deep meaning despite that this poem has just 7 lines, it's very complex and displays a lot of emotions...great job

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Thx Nick....i never realised the 7 line bit:)

[Satan's Daughter]

A bit short and abrupt. Maybe a bit more content?

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

yes i shal add.. thxx

[AK]

Haha :D I liked this poem! It was very refreshing. A short yet gripping poem which talks about much more than what its words show. Great write, keep writing!

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

thx Ap

[AK]

My pleasure :)