Upside down

Kindled by the sound, story and visuals of the movie UPSIDE-DOWN

                                                           

Her silence hurts like a Sillion knives thrust in one’s flesh in the wake of consciousness

She visits when she feels like …like in a vision on a mission from distant satellite, Mars’ Phobos

And though Diemos denizens may lose their hope their very last bit of inverse-matter

I will not let this reverseness shatter the myth that we built once strong all around us.

                     

Two ends of a magnet but separated on reversed World, darlin’ you and damned here I

Two hands that enfold the distance between us and within this alien indigo Sky

Three words are only the ones that I could really tap in Morse code to you there up high

I come from down below and you come from up above, it’s an upside-down sweet goodbye!

                                                                                                  

 

Treetops are kissing on high-mountains opposing your land and mine

When we ascend to the summit and foreign hearts commit to unify

Then howls of the death-hounds and tragedy binds us in isolation

And nothing else matters while falling in dark waters of the Astral as memories die!

 

                                                        

                          

Then when tears have been shed and dues have been paid in warm embraces

And inverse-matter burns when non-refrigerated into the flesh of my chest

And there is no time to make funny faces when untying quickly these shoe-laces

But love’s all we've got when this dream gets too hot as we share this bed of roses!                                 

                      

   WATCH ME RECITE THIS POEM IN THIS  VIDEO AT

http://youtu.be/3LxzYhyoj_Q

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Author's Note

i DONT know whats gettin into me writin like this these days

Reviews

[Michelle Coleman]

I don't know what's gotten into you, writing stuff like this, either. But whatever it is, I hope it keeps coming back.

What a great piece! Having seen this movie, I can more easily identify the feeling expressed here.

Such a wizard with words...

"Her silence hurts like a Sillion knives thrust into one's flesh in the wake of consciousness." Damn. Those of us who have been there know just how painful that can be. Great way to begin your poem.

"Treetops are kissing on high-mountains opposing your land and mine."

"Then howls of the death-hounds and tragedy binds us in isolation and nothing else matters while falling in dark waters of the Astral as memories die!"

Love your style.

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

But love's all we've got when this dream gets too hot -- great line

This one has some really great imagery and detail. I like the flow and the way that you have taken us on a delightful walk through your mind on this one. Surreal and sublime at the same time.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

hello my girl Friday and happy tuesday this new day...
that line was edited just now..to make you feel the way you just felt lol
hey thanks
and its good you dropped by to make me smile

[Vria P Crow]

Hello again, Alienababa

I am communing with you behind the s c r e e n; the veil in between

between Faun of Eden

"Her silence hurts like a Sillion knives thrust in one’s flesh in the wake of consciousness"

Her silence means she is angry, but cares for you in the "wake of consciousness."

FORMAT

1. I love the picture of the red bed.
2. I love the photos used to illustrate your message.
3. I love your honesty within this piece.

FAV PHOTO

i am blue
two people
blue and yellow
r o c k s

Well crafted my friend:D

[Vria P Crow]

haha I hate that read more quirk! Its a demon!

hehe Hello:D

Thank you :)

It was a wonderful poem.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

hey hello Ria...
lol
what an interesting way to review..
i am happy you did..
read morehey hello Ria...
lol
what an interesting way to review..
i am happy you did..
and blue rocks too yeh...
thank you...pls watch the movie wil ya and lets discuss it again..

[Vria P Crow]

I commonly choose not to review the same. Each person has a different perspective :)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

yes u r truly right

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Whoa! You are a force to be reckoned with kiddo!... What the what??!!! lol
I love your whirlwind of thoughts... a tornado of extra terrestrial dreams swirling in this piece.
Never a dull moment! A magnetic write!

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

what magic in your comforting words of encouragement dear Robbie. You light up my life as always.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

awww Kiddo, such a sweet thing to say!... I enjoyed reading this.~xoxo~:)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

i am happy as always when you greet me as you pass by

[jacob erin-cilberto]

probably love...

long distance love...gets tough...i know, am in a relationship like that now.

not much for the pictures..distracts from the writing itself, which is so good...

i like the mythological and celestial feel of this piece.

jacob

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

thank you Jacob it feels that way and yet not that way all in the same moment and breath...
i wish you perseverance in your relationship too..
the pictures were lol downloads to make the piece brighter but as u say they may steer the attention off the script.
i am happy you identify with the presence in the piece. Thank you warmly.

[Rogue]

Aww...'tis beautiful, green squishy. :)
Truly. A bit sad and trying at times, but worth the trouble, no?

Now you best be careful... You keep flashing that heart around and people are going to start calling you row-man-tic. :D

Lovely thoughts here, my friend.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

You found tis first...how wonderful.
No now then...i really mean to keep away from tis love stuff and all...
but this movie I wtched last nite got me..bowled me over..she did
Eden
and you bring a smile to my face in a queerly happy kinda way

[Rogue]

"and you bring a smile to my face in a queerly happy kinda way "
Hahahahahaha
-pokes tongue out at you-
You're welcome. :)
*I hate it when this site acts up and cuts off my words. Sorry for the delete.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

no sorry at all and thank you very very

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

much thanks and smiles

[Rogue]

-smiles back-
My pleasure.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

There i have said it all now