Will you miss me?

Will you miss me?

A Poem by poetry-kiddo alienbaba
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A tearful goodbye

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Thursday, July 19, 2007

Will ya miss me?








Will you miss me?

It’s been a pleasure knowin’ you, Though time has hardly passed…
While a friendship gently grew and blossomed oh so fast…
A stranger in yer town, you lent a helpin’ hand
Tomorrow I’ll be gone, back to my native land!

* And will you miss me, when I go…
Will you miss me I wanna know…
I will miss you, my friends more and more…
I wanna wave you goodbye, before I go….

I was shy when I arrived, You gently eased my fears,
Those sweet moments I’ve derived, they’re drivin’ me to tears..
Mogra flower and It’s leaves, so close but yet so far..
You have been my sailin’ ship…I’ll be yer guidin’ star!

+ Birds returnin’ to their nest are callin’ out to me…
My home-town cries, “come back and rest’,
I can’t stay can’t you see…
I’m grateful fer bein yer guest "an Oak-leaf on a Fig tree…
You gave me shelter in yer nest; a life-time lived fer free!!

© 2011 poetry-kiddo alienbaba


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Author's Note

poetry-kiddo alienbaba
Time to say goodbye!!

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I never liked goodbyes, but this is beautifully done. I felt the pang of sadness behind the words, and it took me to moments in life that we have to say goodbye to people and things and places that have touched us, and the wondering if they will miss us as much as we will miss them. Very nice :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Pax
hey my friend are you going away from wc.... that's just sad... it was fun to have you around...

Posted 6 Years Ago


poetry-kiddo alienbaba

6 Years Ago

helo Pax...
yes
now i must earn a living since it is off-season for 5 months starting to.. read more
Pax

6 Years Ago

i will not say goodbye... but see you soon!
poetry-kiddo alienbaba

6 Years Ago

maybe and thanku again
lovely work ! I do believe this is a favorite so far of yours !

Posted 6 Years Ago


poetry-kiddo alienbaba

6 Years Ago

yeh...the movie was titled 'It's my life' but has not been released for 11 years now since there was.. read more
Renée

6 Years Ago

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poetry-kiddo alienbaba

6 Years Ago

lovely flower baskets
I will miss you, God speed and happy return.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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poetry-kiddo alienbaba

6 Years Ago

Thank you for all you did for me!
"Sometimes I need sometime...on my own...sometimes I need so.. read more
Corset

6 Years Ago

love that song..take care dear.
I know you're gonna come back. It's not like you're gonna sail across the Atlantic just to get on this site:) Good poem. I liked the Oak-leaf on a Fig tree. Rock on kiddo!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

poetry-kiddo alienbaba

6 Years Ago

i got a feeling u arent letting go of me...i will miss my UFO u know
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Mary Ann M.

6 Years Ago

Because I know Konkani, Marathi, and Portuguese and neither says pangit means pretty. If you are fro.. read more
Goodbye

Posted 6 Years Ago


I never liked goodbyes, but this is beautifully done. I felt the pang of sadness behind the words, and it took me to moments in life that we have to say goodbye to people and things and places that have touched us, and the wondering if they will miss us as much as we will miss them. Very nice :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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