Your boy mother

Saturday, June 23, 2007

Yore boy, mother...

Your boy, mother...Your Boy, your once baby-infant, mother.....has returned to the FATHER! 

THINKER.......a DREAMER.....your coat of shiny-armor...bushy-eye brows.....angelic face.....a Charmer.....did his bit...what he could....gave ya respect like a good son should, you made him grow.....and how ...only you would know....watered the plant.....with your life blood-flow....Apple of your eye, let out a deep sigh, dying while we live.....living while we die....Grieve not ailing mother.....give back what you had been given! Taylor's ` sprouted downy-wings, he`s soaring upto heaven!

(This poem is for Late.Taylor Burgstahler`s mother and his

family) .....please visit his memorial website atwww.TaylorBurgstahler.memory-of.com

Author's Note

What loss really means....only a mother and a father would know.

Reviews

[November Gold]

wow, this is so sad, but your words are very nice

[Ryzo]

Aw what a shame! :( Loved the writing, a great deadication. :)

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This is a really sad piece...I know that it is hard for a parent to lose their child...my dad's friend lost his son two years ago from suicide...and the boy was sixteen years old. It's sad when someone at a young age dies. I may be eighteen years old, but still I know the pain of the loss of a child. I feel like this poem was a great tribute to a young person that has died. Good write. Thanks for sharing.

[Cecelia]

"dying while we live.....living while we die."

Great sensitivity expressed in your writing.

[brenda]

sad... and sad again and true only a father and mother would know the loss nice write !:)

[Cherrie Palmer]

Thump- break- click, is the rhythmic beatnik beat this stirs as you read, perform, inform and declare.
Very unique take and form I enjoyed it

[Becky C Strukamp]

I just visited that site and it brought tears to my eyes..wow!!

[Becky C Strukamp]

You are so right ...the loss is indecsribeable, the pain that lingers and returns...the anquish constantly even when all seems right with the world...the pain that only fades with time but never truly leaves us...