Their faith in me dwindles when I go bro..

Their faith in me dwindles ...when I go broke....

Joining the Cruise-liner?!... Now that'd be a master-stroke....

Earning just to spend .....and learning how to be hungry again....

You scratch my back; I scratch yours....lousy trade-off...and what a clumsy joke!!

I work and earn ...you cook and moan ...

when there is no food... I settle for Onion soup......

I fill those young minds with music...you hammer my head and make me weak...

I try my best to comfort you...and you say I'm up to tricks...

The kids have taken after you.....Respect .......to them is a term brand-new.....

I hope that soon they mend their ways...and you mend yours too I pray....

And hope that this silly monkey business is definitely not here to stay!

Walk in my vegetarian- Moccasins ...for just one bloody tiring day....

Detach your self from the Television...it drives your good-sense away....

And for the sake of this Hollow-Earth...stop being a kid and stop bullying Children,

I am done with advising you....wonder if you will ever learn!!

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Pradnya

hey actually me...., no need to learn, you known i am all that good :); jokes apart, poem is just amazing, it is just showing the reality of today, perfectely potrayed with the help of rhyming words ,thank you for sharing

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Posted 12 Years Ago

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Lindsey

wow, I like it it is very good and true.

November Gold

Very nicely done! I liked every line :) I really enjoy your writing :)

FamaSemperVivat

Very interesting, a bit of satire and humor mixed in with real life scenes. Great job!

Ashli The Amazing

it was very nice and interesting [: great job. i liked it

.n.

Interesting. There is a lot going on here...I am a little overwhelmed. There are some great lines here I especially like "earning just to spend....and learning how to be hungry again" this really gives a since of the conflict here and it is a true statement for many of us. Nice work.

Zeitgeist Manifesto

Nice work here. You really gave us a lot to think about.
The bright outlook put a smile on my face.

Tkess

"I fill those young minds with music...you hammer my head and make me weak..."

No matter what you do in life there will always be people who try to bring you down. Charles Bukowski once wrote, "not being able to create art, they will not understand art, they will consider their failure as creators, only as a failure of the world"

Forget the naysayers and rock on my man.

Daytonight

Very cute! Keep up the great work!

Brad	definitely invokes smiling, a little in your face slap with a chuckle Posted 12 Years Ago definitely invokes smiling, a little in your face slap with a chuckle Rating /100