Do you remember me

Do you remember me

A Poem by poetry-kiddo alienbaba
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A song for mother's day on behalf of all the sons in the world to their dearest mothers.

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Do you remember me?

Do you know me? Do I know you?
 Do we know each other? Have we met before?

Can you perceive when I decieve and you forgive me all the more?
Could you reach out and touch my hand although I reside in a foreign land?

Would you weep tears and wash my fears, like water turning rock to sand....

* Were you my mother in my previous life? Do you remember me?
Were you my sister on a distant star? Do you remember me?
Gave me advice when I fumbled for words..... Do you remember me?
Shared my burden, taught me to pardon..... Do you remember me?
I'm your lil boy.................God bless you mummy!


I might have been born as a leaf on a branch
And you might have been the Fir tree,
I might have been flying like a bird on the wing
And you; the wind beneath me...
I might have been snow on the top of a peak
And you; the Himalayan range,
You might have sat on the throne of a queen
And I was just your foot-bench!


I feel I've know you just as you might have known me
A poetic little  family that chats here so warmly
So cozy and so homely, rare and so few;
Yet so many like you
And dear Mummy.................
Do you remember me?!!!


© 2011 poetry-kiddo alienbaba


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Author's Note

poetry-kiddo alienbaba
I posted this hear after I read a poem here by a mother whose son forgot to wish her on mothers day.
Rest assured mother.....he has not forsaken and forgotten you.
He will come back to you one day.
In fact i even made a video and performed it as a song starring Sri Krishna and his mother Yashoda.

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Lovely. Great write!

Posted 9 Years Ago


What another lovely poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


A beautiful poem, set to wonderful music and images. I've never experienced a more heartfelt thought for a mother.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Great sweet poem about rebirth and remembrance! I loved the video as well, beautiful and sweet.

Posted 9 Years Ago


good one

Posted 9 Years Ago


Beautifully written relationship of a devoted mother and son. We never truly forget our mothers.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is absolutely beautiful. Musing life beyond life and thinking big. Reincarnation, the rebirth of a soul, and the whole 9.
I really liked this one. Aside from the compelling subject matter, the rythem and rhyme of this piece was just fantastic. Great job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


What a sweet response to the heart ache of a mother whos son forgot to wish her a happy mothers day, what a kind heart you have!
I enjoyed this very much...

Posted 9 Years Ago


good write :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


what a sweet poem!

Posted 9 Years Ago



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