Thunder

"If you ain't first, you're last"

My favorite part of the storm is the thunder

Unappreciated, and unloved

Chasing after his brighter brother

Banging his drums for attention

He does not awe, he does not shock

But simply annoys and grumbles in the sky

Warning us too late of his siblings mischief

He just wants to be known

Strives so hard to be first

When he knows he will be last

I can sympathize

Reviews

[Lilly Negoi]

:) but you see, a blind person will never see thunder's brother - but will always be impressed by thunder's voice :). sometimes the last is indeed the first :).

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That's a clever characterization of thunder.