drug pushers and their world

They make themselves believe that they are, out there in their world.

They run the streets of Dublin as if they own the world.

Guns going off to the beat, shedding blood on the streets of our world.

They wipe each other out to take control their world,

Blood money, drug money and retaliation money to become the

Higher power of their world.

 

They draw in innocent children, who are vulnerable to their world.

To sell heroin, weed, cocaine and other drugs from their world.

Children skagging and found O.D.ing because they made them proud of their world.

Sucked them in and made it believe that, their  for them in their world.

 

It could be one of yours or mine who will run their world.

 This will just repeat, until drugs are out of our world,

 No!

This will never happen, drugs are like fuel in our world,

So let’s keep our children

Safe and secure in our world.

 

Reviews

[Nautili]

I liked the repetition of the word "world", it gave the feeling of being a rap song to me! Good message, drugs are a blight upon humanity when used recreationally. Everything that is good for us like medicine, has a flipside where it is abused and can destroy.
1 small mistake- happing, instead of happen (unless that is an Irish term I am not familiar with!)

[R J Askew]

Serious stuff. It is a vigorous problem. It never goes, just slides into the shadows and then comes out again in some other guise. I suppose it is the money. It clearly needs vulnerable customers, but the great force seems to be the greed for money. Yet is we solve the problem we have a police state don't we? Or we make drugs legal and tax them. Meanwhile, you are worried about a more immediate problem ... 'are my kids OK?' Great write.

[Leon R]

Great work, emphasizing on real and horrible problem!

[Me]

thanks a lot for this superb work