freaked

 

 

freak

funky fast and spinning wild.

the shuffle twist butt shake, groovin past the belly shirt lass.

she follows your flow, the lids colored radar blue and glitter bright,

licking lips and watching below the belt buckle and wallet zone walk,

and your pushed to admit she’s rockin, glance back catching trace look.

 

low cut and pointing tunes too loud to hear the beer.

her clock wound up and willing, the look see

asks you what your putting down.

flashing the dimmer flick shadows fill in the   space

between sweaty cleave slick and breathing heave.

switch hitting the aqua to keep the pace replied,

a grin within bursts out and beautiful, but bumped interrupt the jerk

asks her to spindle her mixture cream

in his dream retort,

and back to the man at hand she rolls her beamers at the “cool” fool.

 

dark coat rack black unseen and pulse only quiet

the bump beat taps her close to you and her name is Cher-UMP BAP.

repeated pulls the chain bulb bright, and her hand is close and heated, pulling

to exhaust steam and ventilate, giving you the up down as she pulls up

closer than drops in a tub, to nestle scent and check cornea color.

 

push back and tag along a tune that sways her grind,

the drinks left behind and gathering rings on the table,

it’s time

move groove and back the fourth.

 

floor starts to show more and more until she asks

for another great date to meet

and her freckles light up her smile left on a piece

of paper, ripped in two,

swapped and kissed away on your sunrise bed.

grinning and

freaked.

Reviews

[Heather Angelika Dooley]

There is such a lyrical (hussle and...) flow to your work that I admire. I keep thinking to myself, 'You must take a break and come back to his writing, time to pour another mug & check the mail.' But I can't quit! I keep pulling up 'just one more.' :>

[C H Lawrence]

LOVE the wordplay. I can see why putting the words where YOU want them would be important to the ultimate constuction of this. The visual presentation and the literal presentation are often NOT the same things.

[Hedra Helix]

too many good runs of word to list all I like Ill just leave this little one 4 example, lush and sparkly and quirkily done:) love:
"back to the man at hand she rolls her beamers at the �cool� fool"