eclipsed

 

fester

 

 

     this

unattainable

sore of beauty

 

one

       flash

                 glance

                             speaks

     of

distain.

                  unworthy         of

 

a second

 

                delve

 

rampant whole(some)hearted

solid sweet delectably

                                     old fashioned

       humility

the source of laughter

                     snuggles and

                     toes so

                     flutter together.

 

but my shell is scarred

                        grotesque, (though handsomely

                      average)

 

and my pages

would lull you into heaven

 

 

your loss(.)

 

is

 

mine

 

        to

 

ponder

 

 

           with a

shrug.

 

Reviews

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

Well, that was an interesting poem. The scattered words gave me kind of a hard time, but it's cool; I got through it alright. ;) Anyways, I really like how deep this poem seems to be. The tone gives an understandable sense of despair for something or someone which one may never obtain. (Correct me if I'm wrong) But I'm guessing that this poem has something to do with a case of low self-esteem, but, on the other hand, it seems like self-pitying person doesn't seem to care. So, that's very interesting. Great job.

Ironically Yours, -Blade and Blood

P.S. I don't know if it's the structure or the tone, but this poem kind of reminds me of Panic! at the Disco. lol ^^