::Fight::

Fighting to lose.

Losing to die.

Dying to live.

Living to lie.

Lying to gain.

Gaining to get.

Getting through pain.

But not there yet.

 

Crying to feel.

Feeling the need.

Needing to win.

A hunger to feed.

Feeding the cause.

Causing the war.

Warring the battle.

What's the fight for?

Reviews

[Talismanic]

Flawless write and verry thoughtprovoking.
typo - 'Getting through pain.'
That's all. The pace and halting rhymes are seamless, almost singsong - a fight is a cycle of futility - the stark simplicity reads like a child's recitital. It seems to answer, but in the end still poses, the biggest question we face. 'What are we here for,' or 'What the hell are we doing?'
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[Jeanette]

Aww, Harley and our music! Friends to thee end!!

~ROCK ON!! =)

[Harley (arbiter)]

OMG I loved this one! Yeauh! Reminds me of "make rock not war" by Blue Oyster Cult! Awesome

[Jeanette]

Thanks for pointing out the typo! Never would have seen it. And thanks for the awesome feedback, seriously, much appreciated! =)